This game is simply incredible, the dialogue with the characters is not boring at all and it really hooked me! You can be sure that I read every word, and the fact that the main character has his problems and that impacts the story makes everything more incredible (because no one is perfect) but I was sad when I saw that chapter 1 ended... I'M WAITING FOR THE CONTINUATION!!! (I would also like to add that the music is GREAT)
What you've read is an entire 35k words. Hearing you say that really makes me feel that writing all of those made it all worth it. I'm already working on chapter 2. Hope you'll enjoy it just as much when it comes out.
I loved it, but really, everything feels like it was well done, it's been a long time since I loved this type of games, both for their artistic section and for their plot and characters, really a real gem that I didn't expect to find even though at the moment there is only chapter 1. I will definitely look forward to seeing how this develops.
for a visual novel game that's only released for about 2 months, this is quite the hidden gem. the story is great, the characters have depth and a sense of purpose and they arent lackluster... oh and the setup for the next chapter is great as well by the way, although some might think its a bit basic but sometimes you dont have to be great in order to be great... if that makes sense lol.
and the fact that you have to build relationships with the characters as well as NSFW scenes is just the cherry or the icing on top because it just adds that level of realism to the game which, just makes it so much more better in my opinion and this is done so well by the way, great job on that.
everything works well with each other and there isnt a detail that seems out of place. im looking forward to seeing how the story progresses :)
im not usually one to say anything about games or things i download but this one, this one is just... i had to create an account to let my feelings out XD
i do hope this gets more attention because it definitely deserves a lot :>
i feel u man..this game just made me feel something that ive never ever felt from all the avn ive played..and thats saying a lot ,cuz ive been doing shit for years now
Umm first of all I love the game, it's very good and the characters design including the story line and transaction it's definitely one of the best. But I just wanna ask, there's only chapter 1? Cuz I was so confused when the game resets
im not write anything on internet, but.. you really awesome work, this novel its fascinating, please continue, please make this, the best cap 1 novel i play. thanks.
I created this account just to praise the author. Thank you for wonderful game that I can't describe by mere adjectives. Time seem gone suddenly chapter ends; I feel emptiness. Damn it. One of my favorites, can't wait for next chapter.
I like this game specialy the mc i dunno maybe because we have same way thinking of life. Like him i almost give up but im still standing :) hope the chapter two gets well as first chapter
Just played this today, love all the girls. Would love to see how the main guy will get all the girls and hopefully resolve the situations (or create new ones in the process). And who knows maybe hire new people, some people who would never dream of playing competive until the offer.
OR the main guy could find some kind of street volleyball and hopefully get one of the girls to join the team (though there has to be a really good reason to hire)
Sorry for the long one, but that's just my idea. You don't HAVE to follow my idea but it would make for one heck of a good idea XD
Hey, glad you enjoyed it! I think you're already on my server and said hi haha.
The street volleyball thing actually sounds interesting. It's kind of like street basketball where it's more chaotic. Sadly street volleyball doesn't exist like basketball does. I definitely would've used it if I could.
Hello, author, I hope you can fix more translation issues. I've encountered many sentences that haven't been translated while using the Chinese translation feature. Thank you.
its a good beginning, but this site is full of good beginnings that never go anywhere. Ultimatly it will depend on you to deliver the rest of the story with the same quality.
Don't know how you managed to do it..I was only 30 seconds in ..and I'm already hooked 😅
Most avn out right now i always finds myself having a hard time getting into it cause of how boring some of their starts are and then only starts getting good after couple of updates(even including eternum)
But this one's built different man..still in chapter 1,but it's already peak
Really impressed by your writing man
Really wished Im as good as you
I'm actually planning on making avn myself
Can you give me some advice😅😅
It's really hard for me to start,, especially because of the fact English ain't my 1st language
Anyway..can already tell 90percent of the player base is already head over heels for eve😂😂
Can't blame them thu, she's perfect
Only complain about the game so far is saki
I seriously can't bring myself to like her face..it looks weird ,like honestly..but overall still 10/10 chapter..keep up the brilliant work man😁
Btw been playing avn for years now
This is probably the first time I've written a review this long😂
Hi! I'm glad to hear you really enjoyed it <3. Definitely makes me feel that all that time and effort spent on it paid off.
I'm not sure if I'm even qualified to give advice considering my game isn't even 2 months old haha, but I guess write what you want. I love volleyball (And volleyball girls) and used that as the theme so I'll enjoy working on it and won't ever consider it as a chore. English isn't my first language too, but I guess reading a lot of literature helped.
The story so good made me forget that im playing an adult game, and the ego, my ego completely gone, i just want to understand those girls, help them with their situations and have fun playing volleyball.
I just want to say that I love it, I love the story, I love the renders I love the animations and I love Eve so much. Thank you for making this game and hope to see more of it
YES THAT'S THE ONE! I really love how it sets the tune of giving comfort to Johan's anxiety of Eve not coming, it's like a sigh of relief that at least one of them showed up and also imo mirrors Eve personality of that one girl who has your back
Hello sorry for the very late reply. YES I'VE NOTICED THAT AS WELL, it's a really good choice of song for those two since they're the first ones who's really on MC's side. Really excited for your next update
There is something wrong with the newly added translation. You should re-select the language every time you re-enter the game or read the archive. I hope the next version will fix it.
Sorry about that. It looks like I broke the script in chapter 1 so new saves need to be made. I'll make sure it doesn't happen for other chapters and bug fixes.
I like the fact that your putting in the effort to fix bugs. Perhaps when you do update please put it in the description to avoid confusion regarding further game content. Thank you for creating such a good game
The game looks amazing and it has a great story , cant wait for next update although there is one problem which is when you text the girls you can't see your own text but you can see their text, just wanted to point that out so you can fix it
Ps: what is the name of the songs when you meet lexi and in her scene?
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! For the bug, I thought I already fixed it, but it looks like the issue has something to do with different phone models (Screen sizes). I was able to figure it out just now and will post a fix within the day.
The name of the song is "Pushing Rewind" by Blaeker.
Edit: Bug's been fixed. Thanks for letting me know :).
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Thank you :)
What you've read is an entire 35k words. Hearing you say that really makes me feel that writing all of those made it all worth it. I'm already working on chapter 2. Hope you'll enjoy it just as much when it comes out.
I loved it, but really, everything feels like it was well done, it's been a long time since I loved this type of games, both for their artistic section and for their plot and characters, really a real gem that I didn't expect to find even though at the moment there is only chapter 1. I will definitely look forward to seeing how this develops.
Hi. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :). Thanks for writing this. Reading these comments really just make my day.
for a visual novel game that's only released for about 2 months, this is quite the hidden gem. the story is great, the characters have depth and a sense of purpose and they arent lackluster... oh and the setup for the next chapter is great as well by the way, although some might think its a bit basic but sometimes you dont have to be great in order to be great... if that makes sense lol.
and the fact that you have to build relationships with the characters as well as NSFW scenes is just the cherry or the icing on top because it just adds that level of realism to the game which, just makes it so much more better in my opinion and this is done so well by the way, great job on that.
everything works well with each other and there isnt a detail that seems out of place. im looking forward to seeing how the story progresses :)
im not usually one to say anything about games or things i download but this one, this one is just... i had to create an account to let my feelings out XD
i do hope this gets more attention because it definitely deserves a lot :>
Hi! Thanks for writing this. I really appreciate it. It definitely made my day. :)
i feel u man..this game just made me feel something that ive never ever felt from all the avn ive played..and thats saying a lot ,cuz ive been doing shit for years now
Does this have a walkthrough?
Not yet. I might release one after chapter 2
Umm first of all I love the game, it's very good and the characters design including the story line and transaction it's definitely one of the best. But I just wanna ask, there's only chapter 1? Cuz I was so confused when the game resets
Thank you! :). There's only one chapter so far and it's only been released 2 and a half months ago.
im not write anything on internet, but.. you really awesome work, this novel its fascinating, please continue, please make this, the best cap 1 novel i play. thanks.
Thank you! :)
I created this account just to praise the author. Thank you for wonderful game that I can't describe by mere adjectives. Time seem gone suddenly chapter ends; I feel emptiness. Damn it. One of my favorites, can't wait for next chapter.
10/10
That's very kind of you to do and say :). I appreciate that. It'll come out this year.
Nice, just nice nothing else(love eve)
Thank you :)
Loving the story so far and also the music is very nice.
Thank you! :)
I like this game specialy the mc i dunno maybe because we have same way thinking of life. Like him i almost give up but im still standing :) hope the chapter two gets well as first chapter
Glad you enjoyed it. And yeah, I kinda did make him go through a lot didn't I? Haha... Stay strong.
Chapter 2's 50% done btw, check out my patreon for updates.
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Just played this today, love all the girls. Would love to see how the main guy will get all the girls and hopefully resolve the situations (or create new ones in the process). And who knows maybe hire new people, some people who would never dream of playing competive until the offer.
OR the main guy could find some kind of street volleyball and hopefully get one of the girls to join the team (though there has to be a really good reason to hire)
Sorry for the long one, but that's just my idea. You don't HAVE to follow my idea but it would make for one heck of a good idea XD
Hey, glad you enjoyed it! I think you're already on my server and said hi haha.
The street volleyball thing actually sounds interesting. It's kind of like street basketball where it's more chaotic. Sadly street volleyball doesn't exist like basketball does. I definitely would've used it if I could.
Aww OK well it was a good idea though, thanks for replying to me!!
Anytime! :)
Hello, author, I hope you can fix more translation issues. I've encountered many sentences that haven't been translated while using the Chinese translation feature. Thank you.
Hi. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll be sure to have them fixed on the next version.
will this have bdsm, exhibitionism, orgasm denial or chastity?
Nothing too extreme or hardcore. The game leans more into softcore. I don't have plans for chastity though at the very least.
At least say if any of what i mentioned is gonna get added?
Also this feels really cheesy so far. Hope it gets better.
Fire, looking forward for nxt chap
Glad you enjoyed it! :)
its a good beginning, but this site is full of good beginnings that never go anywhere. Ultimatly it will depend on you to deliver the rest of the story with the same quality.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have every intention of making the following chapters better, that I can promise.
Don't know how you managed to do it..I was only 30 seconds in ..and I'm already hooked 😅
Most avn out right now i always finds myself having a hard time getting into it cause of how boring some of their starts are and then only starts getting good after couple of updates(even including eternum)
But this one's built different man..still in chapter 1,but it's already peak
Really impressed by your writing man
Really wished Im as good as you
I'm actually planning on making avn myself
Can you give me some advice😅😅
It's really hard for me to start,, especially because of the fact English ain't my 1st language
Anyway..can already tell 90percent of the player base is already head over heels for eve😂😂
Can't blame them thu, she's perfect
Only complain about the game so far is saki
I seriously can't bring myself to like her face..it looks weird ,like honestly..but overall still 10/10 chapter..keep up the brilliant work man😁
Btw been playing avn for years now
This is probably the first time I've written a review this long😂
Hi! I'm glad to hear you really enjoyed it <3. Definitely makes me feel that all that time and effort spent on it paid off.
I'm not sure if I'm even qualified to give advice considering my game isn't even 2 months old haha, but I guess write what you want. I love volleyball (And volleyball girls) and used that as the theme so I'll enjoy working on it and won't ever consider it as a chore. English isn't my first language too, but I guess reading a lot of literature helped.
Good luck with your AVN!
P.S. Lexi's actually the most popular so far xD.
Woah now that's surprising.. really thought you're native thu. Well I just have to learn more I guess...thnx for advice😁
The story so good made me forget that im playing an adult game, and the ego, my ego completely gone, i just want to understand those girls, help them with their situations and have fun playing volleyball.
Is this some sort of enlightment, lol
I know right? Specially when Eve get first introduced and that little bit of drama, I literally forgot for a moment that this is a porn game lmao
Is there a new version of this plss
Probably not this month or the next. But I'm working on it everyday. :)
I just want to say that I love it, I love the story, I love the renders I love the animations and I love Eve so much. Thank you for making this game and hope to see more of it
Also, just want to ask the name of the Song when Eve appeared for practice when Johan was losing all hope of anyone arriving?
Hey, thanks for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Are you talking about the guitar gbm? That song is called "They say" by Pipo and Wowa
YES THAT'S THE ONE! I really love how it sets the tune of giving comfort to Johan's anxiety of Eve not coming, it's like a sigh of relief that at least one of them showed up and also imo mirrors Eve personality of that one girl who has your back
Haha. I'm glad you caught on that one. I did the same thing with Lexi if you've noticed too.
Hello sorry for the very late reply. YES I'VE NOTICED THAT AS WELL, it's a really good choice of song for those two since they're the first ones who's really on MC's side. Really excited for your next update
I enjoyed the game so much I'm excited For the second chapter 😞
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's coming soon :)
新添加的翻译有问题，每次重进游戏或者读取存档时要重新选择语言，希望下版本修复一下
There is something wrong with the newly added translation. You should re-select the language every time you re-enter the game or read the archive. I hope the next version will fix it.
Hi, thanks for pointing it out. I'll go look into it. I think it has something to do with a default variable in the code.
What's the title of the song that played when he meet eve in the cafe?
Hi. That song is "Truth is" by SRA
Will part 2 come out this month?
As much as I want to, most likely not this month or the next haha. There's still a lot of work to be done. But I'll make sure it's worth the wait.
what's the song you used when the mc gave roses to eve?
Hi. That song is "Truth is" by SRA
When is Part 2? I've really enjoyed everything so far!
Glad you enjoyed it! I'll release something this year.
Great game! I really enjoyed it :)
Thank you :)
Please don't add ntr
I have no plans to add NTR don't worry.
你可以在标签中添加已经拥有的语言例如中文（我来自中国）我相信这可以让很多热爱游戏的中国玩家发现它并热爱以及支持这款游戏，因为我们玩游戏很看重有没有翻译不然我们可能无法理解游戏内容，我第一次下载这款游戏是别人在其他软件转载的并以此获得利益，我进入游戏发现你在这有帐号所以想提一点建议，它尽可能保护你的创作专利。我之前也在这里搜寻一些有趣好玩的游戏，可能因为标签没有中文等其他原因与这款游戏擦肩而过，不过我现在发现它自带中文这让我十分兴奋，希望作者能创造出更多精彩内容我非常期待下次更新🌹
Hello. Thank you for your comment and advice. You're right. I just added both Chinese and Spanish language in my page. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
ur game is amazing xD can't wait to play part2 and more Eve parts plz she's ppperfect
Thank you :). Glad you enjoyed it.
I loved your game and enjoyed every bit of it. Keep up the good work. :)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
I download 0.1.2 wild cat my all save gone
Sorry about that. It looks like I broke the script in chapter 1 so new saves need to be made. I'll make sure it doesn't happen for other chapters and bug fixes.
I like the fact that your putting in the effort to fix bugs. Perhaps when you do update please put it in the description to avoid confusion regarding further game content. Thank you for creating such a good game
Thank you :). Yes, next time I'll post a dev log.
Thank you for the quick reply.
PART 1 is PEAK! Can't wait for part 2
Glad you enjoyed it!
does the version 0.1.2 contain chapter 2?because i played it and there was no chapter 2 at all
Chapter 2 would be 0.2. Version 0.1.2 is just a bugfixed version of 0.1.
Hi everyone. Due to an issue, I've temporarily removed the download links. I'll put them back as soon as I fix them asap.
To all who experienced the issue, thank you for your patience. Android issue about text messaging should now be permanently fixed.
The game looks amazing and it has a great story , cant wait for next update although there is one problem which is when you text the girls you can't see your own text but you can see their text, just wanted to point that out so you can fix it
Ps: what is the name of the songs when you meet lexi and in her scene?
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! For the bug, I thought I already fixed it, but it looks like the issue has something to do with different phone models (Screen sizes). I was able to figure it out just now and will post a fix within the day.
The name of the song is "Pushing Rewind" by Blaeker.
Edit: Bug's been fixed. Thanks for letting me know :).
What a great game！
Thank you :)
Just finished this game... Now I addicted!
Glad you enjoyed it!
It's new update?
Already working on chapter 2. Check out my Patreon for progress updates.