Love the game so far, very fun storyline. I'm wondering what the erotic vision is moving forward? Will a full harem with nsfw moments for all characters be an option? Or will it focus more on choosing individual relationships? Are full erotic moments anticipated in further development? Thank you for the amazing game!
Glad you enjoyed it! My plans are both full harem and individual. I'm just setting up the characters and making them comfortable first so the erotic moments won't feel like it came out of nowhere. But there is a lot planned.
If you are looking for quick results (i.e., "FAP"), this novel is not for you.
If you are looking for a heart-pouring VNs with touching stories, excellent musics, choices and relationships that are relatively more realistic, and eye-satisfying renders, hell yeah, this is your game.
The dev said in the game, "don't be offended by the way MC talked". Oh, please, none taken! Just because it is a fictional novel doesn't mean MC needs to be omnipotently perfect. His struggle is quite relatable. A MC that struggles, learns, and improves, is much more relatable than a male "Mary Sue".
A short VN (for now), but it sells. Highly looking forward to the next release!
Only minor issues I observed were: 1. the word "brazillian" not capitalized, as shown in the screenshot. 2. sometimes the character's scleras (white of the eyes) were too reflective (like when MC met Fiona for the second time, the lighting made the scleras too bright, which is a bit... weird).
Sidenote: I have made Spotify playlists for Eternum, MBML, New Horizon, Sicae, all of which are fabulous VNs with great choice of music... I thought I'm running out of VNs that fall into this category, but guess what, I'm glad that I found another one here.
I was so into the game that I play it in 1 time and didnt even care to save because it was so damn good. I really hope u the best and hope that u keep developing the game. Another question is is there a discord or sth that I can use to connect with u and see the game progress
This is a great game, and I really like it. The scene of the protagonist apologizing to the girl under the backdrop of music is still vivid in my memory. I have been waiting for the update of this game for a long time, and I really want to know when its next update will be. However, thank you very much for making this game
this work is so great so far😭😭Game modeling is a genre I like very much, and the current story of the game is also very good, if possible and the author needs, can I join in the production? I am an architecture student, I can be responsible for the simple model building and rendering for free. (a little more complex is also OK), because I really love this visual novel, it is absolutely my honor to participate in the production, and I can also slightly Lighten your burden from your work appropriately, if not, it is nothing, I will always pay attention to you and this game
The truth is, as an athlete who went through the same thing, I empathize a lot with the MC, in fact at the beginning of the game I wanted to hang the girls, the blonde especially a lot of hypocrisy, but if I feel that way it is because she has very good writing , perhaps one of the best I have played, if I can give a suggestion, please investigate the pain of the mc, when you go through something like this that pain is not something you hide with painkillers, even when they work that pain is there emotionally, like a lament
good game I'm looking forward to the second chapter PS I hate the blonde but she's my favorite
perfect, by the way now that I think about it I did lack a lot of adult content, that and some comic relief, nothing too exaggerated but the pace of the story is always up to speed and that means that certain moments that should feel more important don't have that impact , like when the biker girl chats with the MC, for how long the story goes the pace is good, but imagine playing 3 chapters at once, whatever suggestions
Yes. While it is an adult game, I consider my work more as erotica than porn. Whenever lewd scenes scenes happen, I want them to make sense, and at the same time, be able to develop their character via the scene.
I'm focusing more on the quality of the adult scenes rather than quantity.
Thank you :). A lot of people actually complained about that give up option or not, butI thought it was a good way to portray how much pressure the MC had in that situation. I'm glad you liked it.
The game is just phenomenal and I am really excited on how this game will end since it's set on a story about sports. Loving it. Highly recommend the game.
THIS IS AWESOME!!!. The music! The camera use! The text and motion! I would call this game the same level as Eternum! Please no bad ending!!! If you want to make solo end, I can accept that, but please be happy ending!
Yeah I just invited a friend to have a try and we are pretty sure it's an ammazing work! My friend you have talent on this! Can't wait for next update but don't push yourself too hard, make the masterpiece come true!
Man, this is good stuff! Clean and gorgeous renders, with slick animations. The story is interesting, and the writing is so gripping. The pacing is on point—neither rushed nor dragging. Now I’m eager for the Episode 2 update!
I loved every single second of it. The ending left me craving more, and I cannot wait for chapter 2 and beyond! You’ve got something absolutely amazing here!!
This is some damn good shit man, keep up the good work
Has kinda basic characters with the slut, the hard to get platinum blonde(s), the trouble maker and so on, but beyond that they have so much character that you tend not to see in most games. There's also the fact that the way you wrote this goes against 95% of most other games, this guy's life utterly sucks, and he's having a hell of a time trying to get these girls on his side. S Tier Game.
Hey ! first i can't wait for the chapter 2 <3 second can i know in what engine you made the renders of the character and the background please ? i love the style !
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Good game!
I like the look of the girls, wait for the updates.
Is it updated?
Not yet, but the dev said the update will coming till end of year
非常棒的游戏，加油兄弟
每天进来看一眼 有没有更新hhh
Love the game so far, very fun storyline. I'm wondering what the erotic vision is moving forward? Will a full harem with nsfw moments for all characters be an option? Or will it focus more on choosing individual relationships? Are full erotic moments anticipated in further development? Thank you for the amazing game!
Glad you enjoyed it! My plans are both full harem and individual. I'm just setting up the characters and making them comfortable first so the erotic moments won't feel like it came out of nowhere. But there is a lot planned.
我喜欢你的游戏。里面的女孩都很有个性。你给了她们灵魂。最重要的是你有中文，我想让你知道。兄弟，我爱你，希望你能继续下去。加油。
Thank you for your kind words :).
If you are looking for a heart-pouring VNs with touching stories, excellent musics, choices and relationships that are relatively more realistic, and eye-satisfying renders, hell yeah, this is your game.
The dev said in the game, "don't be offended by the way MC talked". Oh, please, none taken! Just because it is a fictional novel doesn't mean MC needs to be omnipotently perfect. His struggle is quite relatable. A MC that struggles, learns, and improves, is much more relatable than a male "Mary Sue".
A short VN (for now), but it sells. Highly looking forward to the next release!
Only minor issues I observed were:
1. the word "brazillian" not capitalized, as shown in the screenshot.
2. sometimes the character's scleras (white of the eyes) were too reflective (like when MC met Fiona for the second time, the lighting made the scleras too bright, which is a bit... weird).
Sidenote: I have made Spotify playlists for Eternum, MBML, New Horizon, Sicae, all of which are fabulous VNs with great choice of music... I thought I'm running out of VNs that fall into this category, but guess what, I'm glad that I found another one here.
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed my little game :) .
Minor issues just got fixed especially the Brazilian part. As for the other one, I might just have to fix that probably on chapter 3.
absolute.. cinema
Thanks! :)
Try it out
I highly recommend it
Hiii Phi can I have walkthrough
期待在圣诞节前看到新的篇章
Thank you :)
I was sad to hear no lewd scenes yet but was then in love with the story itself lol
Thank you! :).
There's one with Lexi.
ag must've made a wrong choice somewhere
I was so into the game that I play it in 1 time and didnt even care to save because it was so damn good. I really hope u the best and hope that u keep developing the game. Another question is is there a discord or sth that I can use to connect with u and see the game progress
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yep, the Discord link should just be on the bio. Just before the download links.
I just wanna say that I love the game so far.
Thank you :). I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Makes me want to play volleyball
In the next update, will the protagonist resolve the conflict with the principal's daughter and successfully invite her to join the training team
No spoilers :)
Okay, I'm looking forward to the next update. Although the game currently only has the first chapter, I really like this game
This is a great game, and I really like it. The scene of the protagonist apologizing to the girl under the backdrop of music is still vivid in my memory. I have been waiting for the update of this game for a long time, and I really want to know when its next update will be. However, thank you very much for making this game
Thank you :). I'm glad you enjoyed it. I plan to release the next update on December.
I'm very happy to hear that. Is there much update this time? I really want to spend more time with the girls
Should be around the same length if not more than chapter 1.
Although I hope to experience more with the girls, thank you for your hard work in creating Chapter 2. I am your loyal fan!
great :))
Thank you :)
Hey, I'm really looking forward to chapter 2 being released. What's the estimated time?
Glad you enjoyed it. My planned release date is on late December.
Ah but is it a full story update or is it gradual?
It'll be gradual. I don't think it's possible to complete the entire story in one swoop haha. So I'll release it via chapters instead.
It's hard to tell the whole story at once haha, I'll always wait for updates 👍🏻
hey, just wanted to let you know the game is one of the best i've played so far and would like to give you the best of luck in this project!
really looking forward for the next update!
Hey, thanks! Those words means a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
no problem!
also when is it that the next chapter comes out?
Planned release is on late December
this work is so great so far😭😭Game modeling is a genre I like very much, and the current story of the game is also very good, if possible and the author needs, can I join in the production? I am an architecture student, I can be responsible for the simple model building and rendering for free. (a little more complex is also OK), because I really love this visual novel, it is absolutely my honor to participate in the production, and I can also slightly Lighten your burden from your work appropriately, if not, it is nothing, I will always pay attention to you and this game
Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed my little game. I appreciate the offer to help, but I think I can still manage on my own for now. :)
Thank you for your reply, 🙏🙏I fully understand your choice, but if you need help, you can always contact me and I will do my best to help
It really is good game i like the story and the mc is good i hope you will be able to create more you have talent for it i highly recommended the game
Thank you. I really appreciate that. :)
bro im your big fan of your game, i can't wait to play chapter 2
when it is releasing bro ???
Glad you enjoyed it. Late December is my planned release date.
О боги, ну почему первая глава кончилась 😭
Если можно, я бы хотел спросить когда планируется выход 2 главы?
I'm glad you enjoyed it :).
Chapter 2 should come before the year ends.
The truth is, as an athlete who went through the same thing, I empathize a lot with the MC, in fact at the beginning of the game I wanted to hang the girls, the blonde especially a lot of hypocrisy, but if I feel that way it is because she has very good writing , perhaps one of the best I have played, if I can give a suggestion, please investigate the pain of the mc, when you go through something like this that pain is not something you hide with painkillers, even when they work that pain is there emotionally, like a lament
good game I'm looking forward to the second chapter PS I hate the blonde but she's my favorite
Glad you enjoyed it :). You'll find out more about her in chapter 2 as she'll be getting focus.
WHATABOUTSAKI
Saki's getting a lot of love soon.
perfect, by the way now that I think about it I did lack a lot of adult content, that and some comic relief, nothing too exaggerated but the pace of the story is always up to speed and that means that certain moments that should feel more important don't have that impact , like when the biker girl chats with the MC, for how long the story goes the pace is good, but imagine playing 3 chapters at once, whatever suggestions
Yes. While it is an adult game, I consider my work more as erotica than porn. Whenever lewd scenes scenes happen, I want them to make sense, and at the same time, be able to develop their character via the scene.
I'm focusing more on the quality of the adult scenes rather than quantity.
the game looks amazing, i loved that you can choose to give up or not.
Waiting for the chapter 2
Thank you :). A lot of people actually complained about that give up option or not, butI thought it was a good way to portray how much pressure the MC had in that situation. I'm glad you liked it.
Do 0.1.1 and 0.1.3 version have any diffirent about story ? Or it just has some fix ?
Hi. It's just a fix. Chapter 2 would be 0.2.
can you guys take a wild guess on which character i like
I hope you wont stop putting funny moments in the game
I love to mess around so you'll be seeing a lot more in chapter 2 lol.
真是太棒了，加油！
Thank you :)
The game is just phenomenal and I am really excited on how this game will end since it's set on a story about sports. Loving it. Highly recommend the game.
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
You're welcome and thank you too for creating such a wonderful game. Will patiently wait for the next update. 😁
THIS IS AWESOME!!!. The music! The camera use! The text and motion! I would call this game the same level as Eternum! Please no bad ending!!! If you want to make solo end, I can accept that, but please be happy ending!
I'm glad you enjoyed it :). It makes me happy to hear that you think my little game is on the same level as one of the best AVNs out there.
Also no bad endings. I plan to have a solo end for each girl, but the game is ultimately a harem one.
Yeah I just invited a friend to have a try and we are pretty sure it's an ammazing work! My friend you have talent on this! Can't wait for next update but don't push yourself too hard, make the masterpiece come true!
ASIAN BADDIE ALERT👅
;)
圣诞节之前可以看见第2章吗
Chapter 2 will come out before the year ends.
THANKGOD
Man, this is good stuff! Clean and gorgeous renders, with slick animations. The story is interesting, and the writing is so gripping. The pacing is on point—neither rushed nor dragging. Now I’m eager for the Episode 2 update!
Hey! Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed my little game! :) Chapter 2 is already in the works.
I really enjoyed playing this, The plot was so interesting and it kept me hooked to reading the story :)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The reviews alone that I'm seeing here, have enough of a chokehold on me that I am now downloading the game as I type this!
Hope you enjoy it :)
I loved every single second of it. The ending left me craving more, and I cannot wait for chapter 2 and beyond! You’ve got something absolutely amazing here!!
This is some damn good shit man, keep up the good work
Has kinda basic characters with the slut, the hard to get platinum blonde(s), the trouble maker and so on, but beyond that they have so much character that you tend not to see in most games. There's also the fact that the way you wrote this goes against 95% of most other games, this guy's life utterly sucks, and he's having a hell of a time trying to get these girls on his side. S Tier Game.
Oh, hey! You're that guy that left a review. I really appreciate that, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Hey ! first i can't wait for the chapter 2 <3 second can i know in what engine you made the renders of the character and the background please ? i love the style !
Glad you enjoyed it :). The engine I used to make everything is Honey Select 2
Will the update come out this month?
My target will be December.
Hey i wanted to know the song where mc is apologizing to eve at the rainy cafe
Oh btw i freaking love the game♥️♥️
Hey! Sure, that song is "Truth is" by SRA.
Glad you like my little game :)
I love it can't wait for the next update