I actually like this alot, particularly the MC. I wouldn't call him "relatable" and his actions at the start might seem aggrivating to some-- but to me it's a breathe of fresh air. I dunno if he's a pervy guy yet but the fact that there's not a lot of lewd options with him speaks more of his character. A girl is showering inside your room? No "peek at her" option? sure, let me just read this magazine instead. He's got alot of things going on and is completely focused. I dig it. If you're playing this just for lewd scenes, you won't get much. Atleast not in the beginning.
yup, this is a good one. At first I was irritated by the protagonist and his whining, but he develops well as do your other characters. I hope you are able to devote solid time to this project because it really is a labor of love. You have a good eye for story development and you really built up emotions well. I will drop some cash your way. Keep it up!
I was late on playing ch 2 but damn, phenomenal work man, like absolute cinema. Love how our mc is being kind to the girls and huge character developments. Love it. But for some reason I still can't find the song where you meet Eve in the cafe or something after you choose the right moves like I love that song and idk where to find it.
I am a fan of your video game. I loved the story, the characters, the protagonist and his mentality. I am looking forward to the continuation of the story.
I would like to ask you a "technical" question, as your novel looks unique compared to others, both the characters and the scenarios, what programs have you used to render? It looks unique and captivating.
Just got back on playing A-Visual Novel. This was the gem I found and I think this can't even compare this masterpiece to other one I played before. I really love everything offered by this game🥹. The art style, the music choice, and the story/plot especially on the Chapter 2 with Saki. I'm playing for free right now but once I saved enough I will definitely support you LopaPhi and your team. God Bless you and your developing game. I'm looking forward to it! ^^
It was so fucking worth it, to try this game out!!!
I'm a big Volleyball-Fan, and play it myself, so it is really interesting to have a Game with this Setting for its story. I also feel like you may have watched "Haikyuu" xDD
On the other comments i already saw you have some plans with Bianca and I'm really curios what they are going to be. I just hope she stays on the team, it could use some good Blocking-Power^^
Like many others here the only thing to mourn is to discover it so early in the development, so that every highly anticipated update will take far too long D:
Please keep up the amazing work, I only just downloaded and played it today and can already not wait for the next chapter :)
Ps. if you ever want to make a german translation and need someone, let me know :D
ch 2 was so god damn good bruh it actually start making me lmao saki part was pretty good so was zoe mannnnnn even on par with mbiml, sicae and companion of darkness keep up with the good work cuz u gave us so much in this ch is crzy
Honestly I was going to give this game a pass. I just really don't like the art style. However, the comments I read on the game really made me want to take a look for myself. I still don't like the art style, but the storyline is fantastic. I'm not a fan of volleyball, but I am a fan of good looking women. I think, like most people, Bianca is my favourite. Too bad she isn't a LI. After that my favourite is Desiree. The type of girl you just want to marry and have absurdly large children with. :-) Keep up the good work!
Yes, but you will encounter a lot of errors as you proceed. There was a huge overhaul to the UI, and it specifically affects the stats screen.
This will be the only time I will ask you to start over as there's no need to heavily modify the UI anymore after this. Better I do it early, than later.
so anyone like me whos done with both chapters should go back and play the whole story again? before u update with ch 3? or is this related to chapter 2's release? just making sure im not missing something directed at one person XD
Sadly, I don't know how to fix that issue as I'm not very familiar with Joiplay, nor have I used it in the past. There's an android port already, so you can use that.
I think if you add bianca on the main character This will be good Especially since there are many players who love her I wish you success in completing it And I am excited for the upcoming updates
I think I already said this when I played Chapter 1, but this has been truly incredible. It quickly became one of my favorites, and with Chapter 2, I can only reaffirm that. I loved it from start to finish. Honestly, my only fear was when the in-game day ended, thinking that the version might already be over.
Also, thanks for the Spanish translation, which is the language I speak (this is translated with ChatGPT :v). It has quite a few minor errors, which still get the message across but make it read a bit oddly—mostly grammatical mistakes and similar issues, as well as some phrases that would require an equivalent in Spanish rather than a direct translation.
I’m mentioning all of this because I actually took the time to gather the grammatical errors I found in a save file, and I wanted to know if there’s any way I could send it to you—just in case those parts of the translation can be modified—so that it reads more naturally for Spanish-speaking players.
Maybe I could send the save file along with a text document suggesting how the text should be written, or something like that. I’d even try to modify it myself if I knew how :v
Sorry for the long message. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next update! 10/10
I appreciate the lengthy review. I'm glad you enjoyed it :) . As for the spanish translations, I'll inform the person who did the spanish translation. You can reach me via discord. Feel free to send me a DM anytime!
lopa you did a great job on this game :) i clicked on the game for the spicy stuff (didnt even know it was a full blown story), but stayed for the plot. i cant wait to get to know the other 3 women more :)
im just sad i found this game only 2-3 weeks after chapter 2 was released, cuz now i have to suffer until chapter 3 is released. but the wait will be well worth it :) thanks for making such a great story and a fantastic game :)
in case you happen to reply though, will there eventually be conflict with doing "the stuff" with more than one? cuz if so i might go back and change choices, otherwise ill keep playing and experiencing each character at the same time
Hey! Thanks for the quick review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The game is actually intended to be a harem, so go ahead and love all of them. Even though harem are usually unrealistic especially in a modern setting, I'll try my best to make it make sense.
ok, i thought that was the case when i said something to eve right in front of saki (in the gym) and nothing happened i just wanted to confirm XD thank you :)
This is peak. I can tell how much effort is put in each character. Genuinely felt like I approached each girl in this. Only game this is comparable to is VIRTUES. This is absolute peak of such type on vn. Kudos creator man. Good luck for chapter 3 and all future endeavours.
Realmente has hecho una obra de arte y no hablo del contenido sexual hablo de la historia es realmente arte y me identifico con el prota porque tuve un problema y tuve que dejar mí deporte favorito, también quiero decir cómo noté el cambio que hizo el prota en el cap 2 de pasar de ser un cretino a ser un tipo que quiere lo mejor para las chicas y ser un buena persona osea tremendo desarrollo le has dado y ya estoy esperando con ansias en cap 3 para ver qué pasa con Fiona ya que me puso triste cuando la vemos llorar,repito te has lucido con el capo 2 yo te vengo siguiendo desde el cap 1 cuando salió a los pocos días para mí idioma yo soy un tipo que le gusta las novelas visuales aunque está tiene contenido +18 no le quita lo bueno y mayormente son necesarias para la trama espero que sigas así no vemos.
Out of all the VNs currently in development, this one's undoubtedly my favourite and the one I look the most forward to. I loved the in-depth story system that's going on as well as the characters being having human flaws, making it seem way more realistic.
Lopa first what a great story and chapter 2 peak since its beginning i was in this novel and i love so much the characters (Saki 🛐) but could you know if bianca will have some little interactions (weakness for redheads)?
honestly i think just choosing the response that makes them feel wanted (for any character)
like one was something like "i need you" vs "i need you... on the volleyball team" (im butchering it i know, no disrespect to creator), i always choose the ones that specify wanting them, not just wanting them for volleyball.
(if u really have to, quick save before each text option and if its a bad outcome then quick load)
trying not to spoil plot choices in case people happen to read this before they start the game
Spot on! Though it might feel like there isn't much difference based on how it's worded, I feel like being clear and giving the answer where you say you want the girls personally contrary to wanting them professionally makes a huge difference on how relationships start.
Wow... Just wow.... The story, the characters, the interactions, they're all on point. Not to mention, the graphics and animations are amazing as well. Just got done with chapter 2 and I already can't wait for what's next!
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I actually like this alot, particularly the MC. I wouldn't call him "relatable" and his actions at the start might seem aggrivating to some-- but to me it's a breathe of fresh air. I dunno if he's a pervy guy yet but the fact that there's not a lot of lewd options with him speaks more of his character. A girl is showering inside your room? No "peek at her" option? sure, let me just read this magazine instead. He's got alot of things going on and is completely focused. I dig it. If you're playing this just for lewd scenes, you won't get much. Atleast not in the beginning.
Great work Phi! <3
催更！！期待在下一章可以看见 校长女儿的故事
yup, this is a good one. At first I was irritated by the protagonist and his whining, but he develops well as do your other characters. I hope you are able to devote solid time to this project because it really is a labor of love. You have a good eye for story development and you really built up emotions well. I will drop some cash your way. Keep it up!
I was late on playing ch 2 but damn, phenomenal work man, like absolute cinema. Love how our mc is being kind to the girls and huge character developments. Love it. But for some reason I still can't find the song where you meet Eve in the cafe or something after you choose the right moves like I love that song and idk where to find it.
Use the Shazam app and just open it up while the BGM is playing. That's how I found the song during the party scene with Lexi :D
absolutely phenomenal!!
Just wanted to write this motivate my guy hope you don't loose it :)
I kinda wish I didn't start this yet. Ch2 for a game this good is a nightmare
Just caught up with chapter two, there's very few vns that devote time to fleshing out the characters. Which is great and I cant wait for chapter 3
Glad you enjoyed it! :). I like to have you get to know the characters first before the scene happens. To make it more intimate.
I put it in the same league as Leap of Faith and Bad Memories
我赞同你的想法！
I am a fan of your video game. I loved the story, the characters, the protagonist and his mentality. I am looking forward to the continuation of the story.
I would like to ask you a "technical" question, as your novel looks unique compared to others, both the characters and the scenarios, what programs have you used to render? It looks unique and captivating.
Thank you :). I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I used HS2 (Honey Select 2) to render the images.
Woaah! all of the AVN i read this is the most Wholesome I've ever played,looking forward to the next update
Glad you enjoyed it!
下个版本什么时候出
Still too early to say, but I'm already working on chapter 3
Just got back on playing A-Visual Novel. This was the gem I found and I think this can't even compare this masterpiece to other one I played before. I really love everything offered by this game🥹. The art style, the music choice, and the story/plot especially on the Chapter 2 with Saki. I'm playing for free right now but once I saved enough I will definitely support you LopaPhi and your team. God Bless you and your developing game. I'm looking forward to it! ^^
Glad you enjoyed it! :)
It was so fucking worth it, to try this game out!!!
I'm a big Volleyball-Fan, and play it myself, so it is really interesting to have a Game with this Setting for its story. I also feel like you may have watched "Haikyuu" xDD
On the other comments i already saw you have some plans with Bianca and I'm really curios what they are going to be. I just hope she stays on the team, it could use some good Blocking-Power^^
Like many others here the only thing to mourn is to discover it so early in the development, so that every highly anticipated update will take far too long D:
Please keep up the amazing work, I only just downloaded and played it today and can already not wait for the next chapter :)
Ps. if you ever want to make a german translation and need someone, let me know :D
Glad you enjoyed it! :)
God bless your game!
Thank you!
I have two questions: Will each episode focus on one girl? Which girl is the main focus next?
The next chapter will focus on Fiona, Desiree, Lexi and a bit more of Zoe
ch 2 was so god damn good bruh it actually start making me lmao saki part was pretty good so was zoe mannnnnn even on par with mbiml, sicae and companion of darkness keep up with the good work cuz u gave us so much in this ch is crzy
Glad you enjoyed it!
Honestly I was going to give this game a pass. I just really don't like the art style. However, the comments I read on the game really made me want to take a look for myself. I still don't like the art style, but the storyline is fantastic. I'm not a fan of volleyball, but I am a fan of good looking women. I think, like most people, Bianca is my favourite. Too bad she isn't a LI. After that my favourite is Desiree. The type of girl you just want to marry and have absurdly large children with. :-) Keep up the good work!
与你相反，我特别喜欢 这个游戏的 美术风格
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! despite the art style not suiting your tastes, I'm glad you decided to still give it a shot. :)
I'm unable to launch the AVN on Android because it keeps exiting.
Hi! That's strange as testers never encountered that issue. Have you tried it on a different device?
Only on Android
Is there anyway to continue the game without starting a new file?
Yes, but you will encounter a lot of errors as you proceed. There was a huge overhaul to the UI, and it specifically affects the stats screen.
This will be the only time I will ask you to start over as there's no need to heavily modify the UI anymore after this. Better I do it early, than later.
so anyone like me whos done with both chapters should go back and play the whole story again? before u update with ch 3? or is this related to chapter 2's release? just making sure im not missing something directed at one person XD
亲爱的作者，我可以在今年9月份之前看见 第三章的更新嘛
That I will try :) . Maybe earlier if things go well.
👍🏻好玩爱玩
Thank you! :)
im using joiplay, how tp fix this error?
[code]
I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.
File "game/00iconbutton.rpy", line 42: expected a keyword argument or child statement.
0 icon style "iconbutton_icon" properties icon_properties
Sadly, I don't know how to fix that issue as I'm not very familiar with Joiplay, nor have I used it in the past. There's an android port already, so you can use that.
I really liked Bianca. I hope you have the option to romance her. I also ask you to add the translations in Portuguese (Brazil)
Bianca is not one of the LIs sadly. I have other plans for her :)
I think if you add bianca on the main character This will be good Especially since there are many players who love her I wish you success in completing it And I am excited for the upcoming updates
Bianca is not one of the LIs sadly. I have other plans for her :)
I think I already said this when I played Chapter 1, but this has been truly incredible. It quickly became one of my favorites, and with Chapter 2, I can only reaffirm that. I loved it from start to finish. Honestly, my only fear was when the in-game day ended, thinking that the version might already be over.
Also, thanks for the Spanish translation, which is the language I speak (this is translated with ChatGPT :v). It has quite a few minor errors, which still get the message across but make it read a bit oddly—mostly grammatical mistakes and similar issues, as well as some phrases that would require an equivalent in Spanish rather than a direct translation.
I’m mentioning all of this because I actually took the time to gather the grammatical errors I found in a save file, and I wanted to know if there’s any way I could send it to you—just in case those parts of the translation can be modified—so that it reads more naturally for Spanish-speaking players.
Maybe I could send the save file along with a text document suggesting how the text should be written, or something like that. I’d even try to modify it myself if I knew how :v
Sorry for the long message. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next update! 10/10
I appreciate the lengthy review. I'm glad you enjoyed it :) . As for the spanish translations, I'll inform the person who did the spanish translation. You can reach me via discord. Feel free to send me a DM anytime!
This game is amazing! I really enjoyed it! I hope to experience more chapters in the future!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Chapter 3's already in the works! You can go to my patreon for updates.
Saki is the best, haven't felt so attached to a fictional character on a long time. She needs to be cared for after what she went through
Take care of the little cat ;)
I will take care of her, I promise :)
If it's not a secret, how long do we have to wait for chapter 3? This game is in my top 3 and it’s very difficult for me to wait😅
Glad you enjoyed it! The chapter was just released last month, so probably gonna be a while. Not gonna let people wait too long though.
Awesome game, fantastic animations/scenes. Looking forward to more. Saki is best girl btw
Glad you enjoyed it!
lopa you did a great job on this game :) i clicked on the game for the spicy stuff (didnt even know it was a full blown story), but stayed for the plot. i cant wait to get to know the other 3 women more :)
im just sad i found this game only 2-3 weeks after chapter 2 was released, cuz now i have to suffer until chapter 3 is released. but the wait will be well worth it :) thanks for making such a great story and a fantastic game :)
in case you happen to reply though, will there eventually be conflict with doing "the stuff" with more than one? cuz if so i might go back and change choices, otherwise ill keep playing and experiencing each character at the same time
Hey! Thanks for the quick review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The game is actually intended to be a harem, so go ahead and love all of them. Even though harem are usually unrealistic especially in a modern setting, I'll try my best to make it make sense.
ok, i thought that was the case when i said something to eve right in front of saki (in the gym) and nothing happened i just wanted to confirm XD thank you :)
This is peak. I can tell how much effort is put in each character. Genuinely felt like I approached each girl in this. Only game this is comparable to is VIRTUES. This is absolute peak of such type on vn. Kudos creator man. Good luck for chapter 3 and all future endeavours.
Glad you enjoyed it :)
We need chapter 3😭
Workin' on it chief
Thx 😅
Realmente has hecho una obra de arte y no hablo del contenido sexual hablo de la historia es realmente arte y me identifico con el prota porque tuve un problema y tuve que dejar mí deporte favorito, también quiero decir cómo noté el cambio que hizo el prota en el cap 2 de pasar de ser un cretino a ser un tipo que quiere lo mejor para las chicas y ser un buena persona osea tremendo desarrollo le has dado y ya estoy esperando con ansias en cap 3 para ver qué pasa con Fiona ya que me puso triste cuando la vemos llorar,repito te has lucido con el capo 2 yo te vengo siguiendo desde el cap 1 cuando salió a los pocos días para mí idioma yo soy un tipo que le gusta las novelas visuales aunque está tiene contenido +18 no le quita lo bueno y mayormente son necesarias para la trama espero que sigas así no vemos.
Glad you enjoyed it! Happy to hear that the project resonated with you :).
ts is fire hands down
:)
Out of all the VNs currently in development, this one's undoubtedly my favourite and the one I look the most forward to. I loved the in-depth story system that's going on as well as the characters being having human flaws, making it seem way more realistic.
Those words mean a lot :). Glad you enjoyed it.
Lopa first what a great story and chapter 2 peak since its beginning i was in this novel and i love so much the characters (Saki 🛐) but could you know if bianca will have some little interactions (weakness for redheads)?
Thank you! :) . I'm afraid to say that Bianca is not a love interest. There are no side girls in Wild Cats. I have other plans for her.
Currently my number one vn game love what you are doing with this and how real the charachters feel cant wait for the next season.
Honored to hear you say that :).
Очень хорошая игра,можете подсказать когда будет 3глава?
Thank you! Still working on chapter 3
how do i get a scene with lexi
honestly i think just choosing the response that makes them feel wanted (for any character)
like one was something like "i need you" vs "i need you... on the volleyball team" (im butchering it i know, no disrespect to creator), i always choose the ones that specify wanting them, not just wanting them for volleyball.
(if u really have to, quick save before each text option and if its a bad outcome then quick load)
trying not to spoil plot choices in case people happen to read this before they start the game
Spot on! Though it might feel like there isn't much difference based on how it's worded, I feel like being clear and giving the answer where you say you want the girls personally contrary to wanting them professionally makes a huge difference on how relationships start.
Wow... Just wow.... The story, the characters, the interactions, they're all on point. Not to mention, the graphics and animations are amazing as well. Just got done with chapter 2 and I already can't wait for what's next!
Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Chapter 3?
Working on it chief!