You can say that you wrote the MC to be unlikeable early on, in order to make for character growth down the road. It's a good strategy from a writer's point of view.
Why, then, did you make the girls ALSO unlikeable? The ONLY girl in the game that I've met that would have walked away from an IRL conversation with me without a broken nose is Eve.
I could have endured their bitchiness for the opportunity to corrupt and humiliate them later.
The story itself is what is making me quit.
When it was revealed that a girl weighing 92lbs soaking wet, is some kind of terrorist intimidating the little incel MC with merely a look was the end for me.
First of all, the girl apparently brought a gang to school. They beat the former coach into a coma or something. Made all the rest of the members of the team to quit. And terrorized the school to the point that nobody will even discuss the team at all.
And I'm expected to kiss her ass and beg her to be on my team? NO FUCKING WAY!!!
Then, she punched the pussy MC, and he didn't knock her the fuck out. If a woman is gonna throw a punch like a man, she damn well better be prepared to take a punch like a man. (As soon as the "men" of the 21st century figure that out, the number of incels will decrease dramatically)
So, I took the opportunity to give up the scholarship, go work at Taco Bell, surf PornHub, and plan that BSU mass shooter incident!
You said it was a bad ending. I say it was the best ending that I could hope for. Simply because I can't see a scenario where the MC ends the game with the severed head of every girl on the team in his freezer.
I came here to write pretty much the same thing. Fiona was the end for me. I'm not sue how it could be justified that she brought a gang to college, beat the coach and is just suspended for a month. I like a character that has to grow, but everyone's reaction to things felt out of proportion to what was happening. I really liked the premise of this story and the characters look amazing but I don't like any of the characters.
I just finished it. I have to say, I'm very impressed with everything so far. I'm really starving for more content, and it has immense potential, i would love to see some more, i also love the introduction of each heroines and designs 10/10
Man, this is one of the best new games I've played. I have so much expectations for this. Can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work. Btw I would like to ask, there is no ntr or any of that in the future right and is there a harem route in this?(I hope there is)
Gotta say man, I might be biased asf because I'm an ex volleyball player myself but this AVN has a LOT of potential, finally a protagonist who isn't a perv, LI's with actual character building, and a great story so far. Keep it up dude, big fan so fa
Nice girls and story. It reminds me of Slam Dunk in a way. Especially Fiona, fought in the gym, same with Mitsui. Can't wait to see her saying "Coach, i want to play volleyball.😭😭"
It has been a long time since an AVN got me this interested in the story and the girls too. This game has some insane potential in my opinion. Also seems like LopaPhi actually cares about the community which is really rare. Keep up the good work man :)
-also how the hell did you make this just in your free time you are an absolute machine
Haha thank you harem 002. I'm glad you liked it. I don't have a date yet for chapter 2 since I'm only doing this on my free time, but I promise it'll come soon. I'll be providing status updates over on my patreon soon.
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. I don't have a date yet for chapter 2 since I'm only doing this on my free time, but I promise it'll come soon. I'll be providing status updates over on my patreon soon.
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An amazing work bro and can't wait to see the next Chapter!!!👍
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
I'm very satisfied with this game story, what I like the most is Eve very beautiful and nice also forgiving.
Great work lad
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Definitely looking forward to more of this game. Very entertaining
Glad you enjoyed it :)
really amazing 🥰🥰 before play game, i'm impressed by Lexi, but after i like Eve more than her😂😂
Glad you enjoyed it :). I hope you'll like the others soon too.
Good luck dude, but this game ain't for me.
You can say that you wrote the MC to be unlikeable early on, in order to make for character growth down the road. It's a good strategy from a writer's point of view.
Why, then, did you make the girls ALSO unlikeable? The ONLY girl in the game that I've met that would have walked away from an IRL conversation with me without a broken nose is Eve.
I could have endured their bitchiness for the opportunity to corrupt and humiliate them later.
The story itself is what is making me quit.
When it was revealed that a girl weighing 92lbs soaking wet, is some kind of terrorist intimidating the little incel MC with merely a look was the end for me.
First of all, the girl apparently brought a gang to school. They beat the former coach into a coma or something. Made all the rest of the members of the team to quit. And terrorized the school to the point that nobody will even discuss the team at all.
And I'm expected to kiss her ass and beg her to be on my team? NO FUCKING WAY!!!
Then, she punched the pussy MC, and he didn't knock her the fuck out. If a woman is gonna throw a punch like a man, she damn well better be prepared to take a punch like a man. (As soon as the "men" of the 21st century figure that out, the number of incels will decrease dramatically)
So, I took the opportunity to give up the scholarship, go work at Taco Bell, surf PornHub, and plan that BSU mass shooter incident!
You said it was a bad ending. I say it was the best ending that I could hope for. Simply because I can't see a scenario where the MC ends the game with the severed head of every girl on the team in his freezer.
I came here to write pretty much the same thing. Fiona was the end for me. I'm not sue how it could be justified that she brought a gang to college, beat the coach and is just suspended for a month. I like a character that has to grow, but everyone's reaction to things felt out of proportion to what was happening. I really liked the premise of this story and the characters look amazing but I don't like any of the characters.
When is the release of part 2?
Already working on Chapter 2. Will post updates on my patreon.
I really love the story, can't wait for the part 2.
Really enjoyed it. Definitely here to stay to play future updates.
Also, found this small typo in the script. It’s at line 7203.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yep, fixed just now. Thanks for letting me know.
This is amazing LopaPhi. I'm definitely staying around to see more of this.
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for supporting the project :)
Updated the game to 0.1.1 with a bug fix for Eve's emoji issue. Added Chinese and Spanish translation as well.
Good👍👍👍
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This game is so good keep up the good work!, man 👍
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
You know what i really like it, tho it's too short but, I'm waiting bro and i love it <3. When will the chapter 2 will released?
I'm glad you enjoyed it! As for when chapter 2 will be released, I'll leave updates on my patreon :)
I just finished it. I have to say, I'm very impressed with everything so far. I'm really starving for more content, and it has immense potential, i would love to see some more, i also love the introduction of each heroines and designs 10/10
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
ts has so much potential omg 😭🙏
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Mobile when. It looks so good😭
Edit: (Nvm I'm so fkin blind)
xD
Need walkthrough pdf
Eve too gorgeous please nerf
You sure you want me to do that? haha
This game has a huge potential. And may i ask why you dont have a gallery ?
Looking forward for the updates
- EVE is the best girl already hands down
I'll be implementing a gallery feature and more once I release the next update :).
Thanks for playing my little game. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
this game is good, loving it soo far!
Glad you enjoyed it!
希望可以早点玩到第二章，这简直是一款神作
Thank you :). Chapter 2 is now work in progress.
希望 可以在年底之前 看见第二章！！
hey, just wanted to say that the game is amazing cant wait for the next chapter!
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! Chapter 2 is now WIP.
Man, this is one of the best new games I've played. I have so much expectations for this. Can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work. Btw I would like to ask, there is no ntr or any of that in the future right and is there a harem route in this?(I hope there is)
Thanks! And I'll do my best not to let you down.
There is no planned NTR. I have separate endings planned for each girl, as well as a harem end if you decide to romance all girls.
like the game so far but why is there an emoji on the side and its stuck and not going away and some scene with lexi text is bug aswell
Thanks for playing. It's a bug. Supposedly that should've disappeared after Eve's cafe scene. That should be fixed on my next release/bug release.
Following this one closely. I need more and I need it now lol. Amazing job, I'm fully invested in this story!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Hi everyone. Android link has been uploaded. If you find any bugs, let me know on my discord.
this has potential, cant wait for next chapter!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Hello everyone. Thank you all for trying my game out. Discord has been added in the bio. Feel free to come join! I don't bite (Get it? lol).
To give you an idea. It's been 7 years since I've been this hooked to a HS Renpy VN.
Consider me an avid fan. This is simply amazing.
Wow that sure is big praise! Definitely gave me an ego boost haha.
Just finished Chapter 1, and I love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Good Game。Hope to have a Chinese translation
Thank you! I hope somebody would be willing to
Looks like it will soon!
Have it already
胡适去翻译了，很快就会有了。
Thank you! :
Possibility for an android version?
I don't know how to port it, but I already requested it somewhere. We might have to wait.
Gotta say man, I might be biased asf because I'm an ex volleyball player myself but this AVN has a LOT of potential, finally a protagonist who isn't a perv, LI's with actual character building, and a great story so far. Keep it up dude, big fan so fa
Thanks for trying it out and I'm glad you liked it! I just wanted to make sure they're as human as possible lol. Also hello fellow former athlete.
just finished chapter 1 I got say damn this game is good can't wait to play chapter 2
Glad you enjoyed it!
Why is it not working in joiplay pls help
My version of joiplay is 1.20.410
Sorry, but I'm not very familiar with joiplay. But I already requested for someone to port it on android.
Will you join discord?
Setting it up. Gonna send the link here soon.
迫不及待地想加入。😍
Are we going to get haikyuu level volleyball battles.
You'll find out ;)
Nice girls and story. It reminds me of Slam Dunk in a way. Especially Fiona, fought in the gym, same with Mitsui. Can't wait to see her saying "Coach, i want to play volleyball.😭😭"
Huge fan of Slam Dunk when I was a kid. Sadly, it's been a while so I don't remember much about it anymore. And soon, but not too soon haha.
It has been a long time since an AVN got me this interested in the story and the girls too. This game has some insane potential in my opinion. Also seems like LopaPhi actually cares about the community which is really rare. Keep up the good work man :)
-also how the hell did you make this just in your free time you are an absolute machine
Well, hearing that is an honor haha. I'll be sure to do my best and meet your expectations for future updates too.
- Definitely wasn't easy. But when you enjoy doing it, and see the results of your time and work, it's pretty rewarding and makes you keep pushing.
Hiiii LopaPhi I love your game for the first time please tell me when will the chapter 2 release😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Haha thank you harem 002. I'm glad you liked it. I don't have a date yet for chapter 2 since I'm only doing this on my free time, but I promise it'll come soon. I'll be providing status updates over on my patreon soon.
Thank youuu ummmm...lopaphi I have an issue I've seen misspelled words like the audacity please fix it for me 😊😊😊
Just fixed it. You won't see that on the next version.
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Acabei De Terminar O Primeiro Capítulo, E Ja Estou Ansioso Para O Proximo, Parabens Pelo Jogo, Tem Data Para Sair O Capítulo 2 ?
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. I don't have a date yet for chapter 2 since I'm only doing this on my free time, but I promise it'll come soon. I'll be providing status updates over on my patreon soon.